Request for Feedback on My Motivation Letter for Turkey Scholarship?

Hi everyone, I am applying for the Turkey Burslari / KAU scholarship and I have drafted my motivation letter / SOP. I would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on clarity, structure, and impact. Here is my draft: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wHT2B3otW-3F6zDTdQ5nvUrE9HOPLx1g3xCLazi9ggQ/edit?usp=sharing A few things I am especially concerned about: Does it clearly explain why I want to study Computer Science? Does it show my interest in studying in Turkey? Is the story flow and structure easy to follow? Any other improvement suggestions are welcome. Thank you so much for your help!

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