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Sophia
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What are some ways to make my essay stand out to colleges ?
What are some ways to make my essay stand out to colleges
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Jerry Tingstad
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First, start with Teklemuz's answer, as there are so many items you will need to tick off.
The only thing I would add is the importance of your first sentence. Craft it in such a way that it basically writes your entire essay. In other words, if the first sentence is a good one, all you have to do is just continue on.
I think you have to keep in mind that this situation is really a competitive essay "contest", and you have to come through better than your opponents. I would write, perhaps five essays, figure out an exact word count, and practice and practice before you write the ones that count.
And I notice you have asked second query. This is the one I chose to answer.
The only thing I would add is the importance of your first sentence. Craft it in such a way that it basically writes your entire essay. In other words, if the first sentence is a good one, all you have to do is just continue on.
I think you have to keep in mind that this situation is really a competitive essay "contest", and you have to come through better than your opponents. I would write, perhaps five essays, figure out an exact word count, and practice and practice before you write the ones that count.
And I notice you have asked second query. This is the one I chose to answer.
Teklemuz Ayenew Tesfay
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You can make your college application essay shine by truly showing who you are. Let your essay reflect your personality, attitude, and growth. Start with a strong opening that grabs attention, like a vivid moment from your life. Use real experiences to highlight qualities such as curiosity, passion, determination, or resilience. Share the lessons you've learned and the challenges you've faced, explaining how you overcame them. Mention extracurricular activities, community service, or leadership roles only if you were deeply involved and made a real difference. Wrap up your essay by linking your story to your values, identity, or future goals.
Make sure to proofread your essay carefully and ask teachers and friends for feedback. Explain how you connect to the school when it fits. Strong recommendation letters from teachers who know you well can boost your application by confirming your achievements and highlighting qualities your essay might miss. By blending personal stories with thoughtful insights, you can leave a genuine and lasting impression on admissions readers.
Make sure to proofread your essay carefully and ask teachers and friends for feedback. Explain how you connect to the school when it fits. Strong recommendation letters from teachers who know you well can boost your application by confirming your achievements and highlighting qualities your essay might miss. By blending personal stories with thoughtful insights, you can leave a genuine and lasting impression on admissions readers.